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Sebastian concealed himself amongst the boulders and bracken, the
only noise a low breeze that fluttered through the fernery. Though he
knew his friends were close, he suddenly felt quite alone. As he peered
at the ebony sky, thinking he had never seen such darkness, he noticed a
faint blue light. He took it for a star until it grew steadily brighter
and he realized it was an aiia. The nervous excitement he had initially
felt—long since dispelled by the irritation of staggering across
moors—returned as icy fear. He pushed back against a rock, desperate to
meld into it. Unsure where his friends had hidden, he contemplated
calling to them, but stopped himself for fear of the aiia overhearing.
He felt an irresistible urge to up and flee, to take his chances and try
to outdistance it, not to stay there like a helpless animal, easy
pickings for the monstrous creature. The longer he stayed, the greater
he worried he was losing his head start, yet as the light advanced
pitilessly he found himself unable to move. Now he could see her
outline, the floating body no bigger than his thumb, the silhouetted
head darting this way and that. He tried to dive for cover, but his body
froze, unwilling to move despite his exhortations. It was not until the
aiia steadied forty feet from the ground and began to pass back and
forth, scanning the moors, that his body finally heeded him. He slid to
the ground and pressed his face to the earth, screwing his eyes shut and
covering his ears, desperate to zone out.
“Sebastian!” she cried, the hills echoing to her lamentation.
Never
had he heard anything so alluring. He removed his hands and raised his
head. As she flew overhead, he turned to her and was transfixed by her
beauty, surrendering fully to the uncontrollable passion that hurtled
into him, possessed his entire being, and vanquished all fear. All he
wished was to behold her forever.
“Sebastian!” she repeated, desperately, achingly.
Such
pain. Such yearning. His love-addled mind had an epiphany. He would
return to her, for surely it was she, the one eternal love that each
renewed life was a quest for. They had finally found each other. How she
craved him. How she missed him. Seized with a violent desire, his arms
reached out to her, but the tall fernery conspired to conceal him.
“Sebastian!”
she wept in heartrending tones, sweeping directly above. As she sang
his name, a metallic liquid issued from her mouth, carried on the breeze
this way and that. A chain of drops descended to him, pouring into his
ears, filling him with ecstasy.
“I’m here,” he gasped, yet his love-parched throat would brook no words.
The
desire was so intense it became agonizing. He struggled to find his
feet, yet his leaden limbs betrayed him, as if his mortal frame were
jealous of the pending reunion of souls. With a Herculean effort, he
sprang up and began to wave his arms wildly. Too late. She was some way
off and did not look back. Finding his lungs, he released a plaintive
howl.
I cannot say just how much I have enjoyed this book; you are a very accomplished writer with a wonderfully rich imagination. Your use of the English language is amazing and your ability to create the many different speaking styles in the book and to maintain them is remarkable. You have an incredibly inventive mind and readers will come to love the many wonderful creations in this novel, it is jam-packed with the most wonderful and inventive characters; new, exciting and beautifully realised. ~The Oxford Editors
An imaginative epic...an intricate and fully realised fantasy world with a big cast of likeable characters that are charming, well drawn and endearing, with wonderfully apt names. The depth and breadth of your high-voltage imagination, and the richness of the world you create is very impressive. ~Sam Mills, author of Blackout, The Boys Who Saved the World, and The Quiddity of Will Self
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